/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4878833
I think if you raised her left knee a little bit it may look a little more natural... OR draw a foot under her right knee and thigh. It may help to apply forshortening from the left hip to help you position the left leg.
I think you bulked up the left forearm a little too much and it's not proportionate to the rest of her limbs (said limbs being thinner). I think your left forearm in your previous version felt more natural... Lastly, you got a rogue pink (and maybe thumb) on your hands! I tried to do the same post as her and considering her left arm is used as support, a bent pinky would be very uncomfortable.
Sorry for image related being of low quality, but I think the top portion might be useful. You can either apply full weight (which may require a little adjusting of the back's position) or you could go for a more gentle weight application just to the finger tips. It depends on how much weight you want her to apply to her hand.
Lastly, you are establishing a ground with her hand. So, her butt should also have weight applied to it. Making the bottom of her butt a little flat will imply a squish against the "ground" and make it feel more natural and less "floaty void."
Overall still a very nice warm up! Sorry for all the concrit, it really is still a very nice drawing even as is, but I hope I could help even just a little bit.