/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2976364
work on your anatomy
-that right shoulder is dislocated
-the breasts are too far down on the chest
-her back is too long
-her left shoulder is poking out while her left hand is lower than the right one, It should be higher since the shoulder is out
-face is too long
-you cant put your arms in that position with your legs bending in
-eyes are too high
or does she have six eyes? I dont really understand what those red dots are

anyway i redrew it for you in a better pose