/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Is this a decent enough design for a tattoo? It's not necessarily anything too fancy, I'm probably going to end up giving it to the real tattoo artist and he'll change it up as he sees fit. But if I hand it to him, is he going to scoff or laugh in my face? Keep in mind this is going on someone's body. A friend asked me to draw it up for her, she's the one who wants it. Just tell me if there's anything wrong please, if not for my sake then for the sake of the person who is going to have this permanently inked on their body.