/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Leo:
Presentation: 4
Inconsistent presentation. Pulling them up side by side leaves things to be desired, as it is clear you didn’t do a once over to try and make everything cohesive. Consider turnarounds next time.
Design: 5
Fundamentals:
4
Style cap!
Overall:
4.33


Bandit
Presentation: 3
You had 2 months!
Design: 5
Fundamentals:
4
Good thumbnails, struggling with finalizing.
Overall:
4

Psiekier
Presentation: 2.5
Maybe time to get a tablet?
Design: 1.5
I’m unsure if these were redesigns for existing shows? I see a giant rei ayanami and some 90s anime looking reboots
Fundamentals: 3
Proportions are all over. Using reference isn’t cheating. 2 months to work on these so you should really be ironing out the underdrawings.
Overall:
2.33

Yomotsuheguri
Presentation: 1
Design: 2
Fundamentals: 2
Overall:1.66
Tribunal. You had 60 days, you do not deserve this badge.


Cath:
Presentation: 3
Bordering on two for the low effort characters tossed in afterwards.
Design: 2.5
More iteration and planning needed.
Fundamentals: 2.5
Material studies are needed. Characters take away from the mechs, inconsistent style.
Overall: 2.67
Even though its polished, it feels like the work is consistently lacking a higher level of critical thinking. Feels like you are missing a piece of the puzzle and aren’t even aware that piece exists yet. Your style really holds you back.

Srion
Presentation: 4
Inconsistent presentation. Pulling them up side by side leaves things to be desired, as it is clear you didn’t do a once over to try and make everything cohesive. Consider turnarounds next time. The lineweight is jumping around is a bit odd.
Design: 5
Very interesting!
Fundamentals: 4
Material study time!
Overall:
4.33

Silvemis
Presentation: 2.5
Very rushed, inconsistent.
Design: 3.
Really a 2.5 but +0.5 points for making cute/light hearted things. Try to manage your time better and explore this type of stuff further.
Fundamentals: 3
Overall: 2.83