/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2468066
Thank you!! That was really helpful! This was a test piece, the original sketch isn't colored yet but I'll be sure to use your tips.

>>2468814
Haha thanks. And yes he is, he really liked her

>>2468047 #
>Mostly good. The feet could be better. Hands
>might be more appealing if smaller and daintier.
>The face has a lot of sharp angles in it and sharp
>transitions of value, that often tends to take away
>some appeal. The shading on her body is nice but
>the color's a little dull. I'm not sure what color
>would best spice it up but maybe something like >a mahogany/dark honey color on the undersides
>that should be in shadow or a light pink like the
>large sections of the shoe soles along the upper
>areas that are supposed to be in light. It also
>looks like you missed a spot filling the
>background between her buttock and shoe.
>Overall nice, though.

Thank you!! That was really helpful! This was a test piece, the original sketch isn't colored yet but I'll be sure to use your tips.

>>2468047 #
>Your boyfriend will be happy.

Haha thanks. And yes he is, he really liked her