/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6618222 Part 2

>TABLE TENNIS: Pauline
I didn't finish reading it, I admit. Cute anon going full autism with an entire movie about pingpong. While this one had too much, Cassia delivered too little. Since Pauline did also deliver many panels with good art at first, she gets my vote. Were it all storyboard, no.

>SUMO: Boberon
The colored page from Dragonlady was awesome, but Boberon had some great visuals and jokes, even though he just storyboarded the ending. Still found a good excuse through narrative, good job.

>SKATEBOARDING: Mike
Mike delivered more polished art and more skateboarding. Cannon Girl was pretty funny, were it finished and maybe a wee bit longer I might have voted for it.

>GOLF: Vormio
Merachne was the better artist in this match, but I won't vote for characters who lost in their own comic; we're voting for the winners, after all!

>CHESSBOXING: Vivian
Both did great. Vivian made better use of the comic medium, with many effects, dynamism and whatnot.

>PARKOUR: Balkari
Another very good match. Balkari had a more creative approach. Maiden-4 had very great panels.

>FENCING: Alaïsa
I am floored by the art my opponent put out. Truly amazing, most polished of the batch. Had the duel/action been more explored, I'd happily vote against myself.

>TRIATHLON: Shin-Chuckson
Great comic design, cultural references, wording. Antonio was also entertaning, but too conservative with the plot, not memorable enough. One suggestion: having 2 alternating frames of the characters running would improve the race immensely.

>ARMWRESTLING: Ja- John
Maybe my favorite montage in the 19 minute epic. Nathan had a meltdown and delivered something too raw, couldn't bother reading all of the dream scene's handwriting. Still entertaining.

>100M DASH: Jed
Hardest vote this Round. I don't know who did which part of the art, so I'm voting based on the story. Turtloli is cute, but Jed's MacGyveriness was really cool. Blue shell almost makes up for it.