/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4120308
Late response, but thanks for the advice anon.

Also, >I drew out the linear indication of the delt way too far

You mean the deltoid should be closer to the neck, right? Just want to be sure I understand fully. Pic related is the drawing in question.

>>4120499
c u t e, I also really love the lighting done on the bathing suit, makes it feel like it's summer

Revisited this drawing last night, paid closer attention to the shapes/forms of the guy's body and yeah, this is leagues better than the first one. Lower torso needs work tho

Went back and redid the roughs of this, paid closer attention to the shapes of the guy's body, and yeah it's leagues better than my last version. Gotta work on the lower torso tho