/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4224488
Really weak but trying.

You slapped a 6 pack on her but you never heard about the sides and the other muscles.
She has no sides, no arm muscles, no pelvis or ass, her ribs stick out like on the Joker in the last movie, but she has one powerful rectus abdominis. Like imagine have one single muscle in your body.

Also the tiny little wrinkles on her face immediately turn her into an old lady. Since in stilization everything is very simplified, streamlined and many details are omitted when you draw a tiny wrinkle it really fucking sticks out as a major and important detail.