/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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With that I mean, shitty linework aside (and in this case, shitty fixing aside), I use the construction learned on that book both for the head and the body, and the face. Although obviously im not going for the cartoonish style. But still, I can obviously see that the drawing feels lifeless and flat, but could it be just because I havent practiced long enough and thus im not getting the right proportions?

Im doing the cubes thing now, but will post results probably on the next thread. Trying to practice clean lines. Pic not related.