/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

working on my lineart with some miku

>>5154170
neat, some things I'd note:
- face looks kind of flat, like it lacks side planes? it feels like a mask rather than an actual head that wraps the whole way around.
- drapery is a bit too loose / flat imo, could use more defined, solid outlines and colors
- balance is a bit odd, the way she's tiptoeing + an (unintended?) lean backwards

some (very) subjective anatomy stuff:
- upper arms are too long?
- abs are too large, make them a bit smaller and show more of the obliques
- boobs are pushed too high up and far apart
- could use more definition around the crotch area ;)
it still looks really good on the whole though, keep at it