/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5060893
Yeah it's clear to me. I like it, and I like the colors. I'm beg so take my critique with a grain of salt..
Maybe add motion to her hair, like she just did a super speed hitsurugi style slasher. And maybe the skelly guys right hand can be open more to express surprise/pain. Not clenched, it's a little too stiff. And this is just some beg nitpicking and totally up to your preference cause i know it's a skelly, but adding some expression to his bone features might help. his left eye looks kind of bored and his mouth closed could be better being slightly open but that's just to convey more surprise.

One more thing, the size difference. Are her lower legs the same length as the monsters? If that's the case, why is the monster big on the top half but then small on the bottom? Is he falling backwards? Then you may have to make some perspective changes cause it doesn't convey that. It may be better to have her legs in a more standing motion than squatting to show the proper height/size difference. I hope I explained that well enough.