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>>3092754
The figures look wonky because you're focusing too much on contour. You should simplify your figures, work with very basic gestures first. Find the rhythm and flow in the pose.

Also simplify your anatomy. Don't try to get every single nuance in there until you're competent with the major parts first. Study the largest aspects of the body such as rib-cage and pelvis. Define those shapes better. Understand weight and balance of the body.

It's better to start simple and get that down before you add detail. Also do not leave out the neck and head. They have their own counter balance relative to the shoulder.