/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3889575
The head positioning looks off in a way. Also the angle of the hip is different from the anime reference. Your eyes aren't looking inwards like the original as well, and because of this it gives your drawing a 100 yard stare feeling instead of a feeling like the drawing is looking at something in particular.
Your drawing of the mouth looks nothing like the original. While yours seems more like a line going from the center of the drawing to one side, the other feels a bit more symmetrical despite having a stylized gap in between where the lips are. Even the way the scar under the eye is positioned is different. The original image's scar is pulling down, almost towards the chin. Yours it is simply going down from the eye.
Remember that anime is merely real life simplified and stylized, and to do a better job at drawing your waifu you have to learn from real life. I reccomend purchasing a smaller pen or drawing larger as well.
Im not a pro so it might not be very good, but I tried to show some comparisons and what is off in this redline.