/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Could I get some feedback on this? I'm really intrigued by underground spaces, their winding passages and inky blackness, and overall mysteriousness, but it's difficult for me to depict the sensation.

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>>2302548

practice drawing your own hands in various poses. do what >>2303106 says

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>>2301987
are you tracing pictures or using them as reference? i actually really like your greyscale one, you just need to not rush it. the water and light is ace.

>>2302235
im struggling with this too.

i just go for the shape and foggy image of what I want to draw, correct the anatomy, then erase it all and sharpen the image.

you need to study more anatomy, look at people, watch the way they move and their natural composure.

>>2302500
not too bad senpai. do it again, but try to flip the image left to right in your mind also.

>>2302517
looks like it gives you more of a feeling of a pencil. i recommend you observe and practice more faces. i like to watch films and sketch expressions. the way some of your faces are drawn is not "put together right" even though they are drawn well

>>2302950
DRAW FROM LIFE

OBSERVE!!

>>2303020
nose sucks fampai. don't use such hard, straight lines for giving shadow. it looks like the figure has been hacked crudely out of clay. the legs aren't natural looking, the hips are strange. the ass is also really saggy. needs loomis

>>2303083
you aren't as bad as you think, but you are making some basic mistakes. first off, the striding woman in the middle's leg odes not match up at all, and it looks like she's been killed in a car accident.

just keep practicing.