/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3508741
I don't actually know anything about anime so take this with a grain of salt, but I feel like the facial proportions are cramped, with the mouth being especially wide and low. There are also some unflattering planes you added into the face that I'm not sure should even be there anatomically, specifically around the chin. Reducing the gap in the value range in the light group is a good idea here. I wanted to do something about her lazy eye, but anime eyes is a whole science in and of itself that I haven't really looked into and it still looks off to me here. Mind the negative space between face contour and facial features and keep your lights and darks distinct.