/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4181898
The colors don't seem to be toned well and highly saturated, they feel a bit "apart" and in my opinion it causes the drawings to not feel delicate. The girls she draws don't seem very subtle nor cute because of this, and also because of the expressions. They lack the shyness seen in most anime illustrations. The hair feels plasticky and mostly shaded with the same hue. The composition is very bland, as every character is in the center of the image which makes the drawings non-immersive. Her jaws are often spiky, I don't think what she draws is cute, it doesn't give me the gentle feeling. One of my favorite artists is pic related, and... she just doesn't seem to have it