/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4019242
>You concentrated so much on her back but her neck placement is off. Its too far detatched from the spine.
I actually got so bothered by the back I just stopped and lazily hid it behind the hair :P

>The legs are off as well, theres no leg that is closer to the camera to balance her - they both look like the "far away leg".
I don't exactly know what you mean by that.
She's not stepping off into the distance, both legs are supposed to be on the same horizontal level.
If you're talking about weight-distribution I marked what the legs are supposed to communicate.
Also since the right leg is supposed to be the weight-bearing one, the torso is leaning to far left.