/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4481577
I've attached what I would do (this is just a rough, quick edit). A few notes:

+As others have mentioned, her left eye (our right) is absolutely borked. Eyes are tough to draw at this angle - the eye would probably look more like what I've drawn here.

+The placement of the ear is, (as other anon said) currently at the back of her neck, which looks odd. Consider erasing it and redrawing it in this general area. The neck is a little girth as well - consider taking the whole thing in a notch.

+I selected the entire hair+bow and moved it down a bit. It looks like the whole mass is a little high.

+Her body looks odd. Consider simplifying the shape. It's sort of unclear what pose she's supposed to be in. Arms out in front? If so, make it a little clearer.

+Mouth was a little too small. Looked like she was making a puckered 'kissy' face.

+A simple rimlight could really help describe the forms of her face. I find rimlights work nicely on portraits with such bright yet super simple backgrounds.

+The previous minty BG color is fine, but I think you could just make it a nice light blue - make the color scheme look more unified.

+The bow is really well done and I like the texture of the hair!

+All of my criticisms came from just flipping the canvas horizontally. Remember to do that often, especially when drawing portraits. These things will jump out like a sore thumb.

Hope this helps!