/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3667118
Anon, it looks good, but you need to put in more effort, great results will come from really getting in there and defining those shapes and planes. Don’t forget the background, no matter how unimportant it seems, even just an added shadow will change the perception of values within the subject. You need to push those lights and darks, not arbitrarily, but notice those small spots where the light hits extra bright like the line defining the bridge of the nose, or where the darks hit extra dark, like where the shadow defines the edge of the brow. This is a good start, but it looks like just the second step in an extensive multi step process. I’m at work, so I had to do this with a mouse, sorry if it’s sloppy and for the poor hand writing, but I hope the redline attaches helps. Good luck anon, keep going.