/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6676061
well fuck i got mogged to hell and back before i even finished my redraw, gonna post mine anyway
>>6675852
Look i don't know about background or anatomy, I'm beg too. I just think you failed during the planning/conceptual stage.
I mean, why did you leave all that empty space, what is it for?
Why is she rushing forward? If she's fighting back then she should be using her hands, if she's not fighting back she should be arched back while still supporting herself. The hand over her mouth should be pushing her, straightening her out.
Why is the hand cupping her breast so coyly? I mean it's rape so why is it being sucha a pussy?
Why is she stark naked in some building? No sign of struggle, were they taken off? Also kinda weird for you to strip a schoolgirl completely naked when the outfit is the appeal (yeah I recognized it's asa, pedo). I mean we all know you just chickened out of drawing clothes
Also she has a lazy eye, either have her look somewhere or give her a 1000-yard stare.
If you have issues with anatomy you can always reference everything that doesn't look right