/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4900245
that dagger in his right hand looks like it's made out of rubber since it's bending
it doesn't feel like his left arm is connected to his sleeve, i think you should try and hide a bit more of the sleeve
the folds on the right side of his body should be dragged by the raised shoulder rather than folding horizontally. pic related
big thonkin moment here but i'm not sure if your character is a girl or not. he looks like he has tits
>what are some things that make it look western?
the face in the first pic looked more western, i think it's because of the black irises, the nose and the large mouth. the hair in the second drawing looks more stereotypical anime: seems like a generic haircut you'd give to your protagonist. i'm sure other anons will be more helpful than me in that regard

the pose is a lot more interesting here and your drawings have been fantastic so far, even with all that being said. keep it up anon, i love you <3