/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5002335
Ah, sorry, i didn't see the initial talk.
Ok, in this case the idea would be to be as clear as possible and to try avoid lines being paralel with the frame.
Tilt the head, tilt the shoulders, show the head bent forward more clearly etc. These are standard tricks to avoid boring images. Do you see it in my sketch? And be careful aout the shading, rule of thimb, if shading is making the image unclear or breaking the figure then minimise it. Don't be afraid to be simple.