/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Thu Jan 18 17:02:44 2018 No.3280904 [View]
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Characters are always quite hard for me. I guess I can get away with mistakes if I render loosely but I would like to improve my construction and perspective. Any pointers are welcome.

>>3280701
The texture is way better now. I think the clavicles need to show if you want to fix the neck. Still not entirely buying the softness of the face. You've got very sharp edges in the hair and chin but the eyes are still out of focus.

>>3280429
Yeah I would. it's very neat. The black one especially.

>>3279881
Nice values and drawing. Love the creepy face. It looks unbalanced as it is. Not enough going on on the bottom right. A ground plane and better feet would help IMO.

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