/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3035493
Changed a few things, you might not agree if your vision leads elsewhere. I just don't know what your vision is :)

In your version, there's too much contrast between the raggy parts (hair, scraps of cloth at skirt) and supertight parts (like shoulders), so it's good to pick one of the two for the main costume and use the other merely as an accent (e.g. in the form of a sleek badge on a scraggly costume or in the form of a bandage on a tight costume)