/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3412749
What >>3412893 said, mostly. In addition, with pixel art there are some things that aren't really conducive to being drawn, at least not without being abstracted away a bit. The chainmail on the two right figures, for instance, just doesn't work, especially not with the darker color on them being that brown shade. Either figure out something else they could be wearing or find a less jarring way of showing that they're wearing chainmail.
There's also a lot more that could be done with what they're wearing; right now it's very blobby and flat, when stuff like cloth folds or different segments of armor could be brought out.
But yeah, what the other guy said; get some more practice in.