/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hey guys, I just want to try and redeem myself for posting something generic and boring in the last thread. I'm trying to develop a style and here are some sketches I did today. I spent over an hour altogether but I did just finish the Dracula one and I did only spend about an hour, maybe 15 minutes over, on that one. Anyway let me know what you guys think, this is the first time I'm trying to make a conscious decision about a style for myself, and it's in no small part to how you guys pointed out my other sketches were so boring, so I really want your feedback.