/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6116766
it just looks like some of the proportions are off

excuse the lazy mirror redline here- but from what I can tell the torso doesn't "match" the head size, and as a result everything else feels off, like the length of the legs and size of the feet and hands

breasts don't usually appear so high up on the body too, and obviously your picture here is slightly skewed compared to the mirror image I've drawn here.

But hey that's hard to do - good start keep at it - it's a good pose to test anatomy, but I'd suggest looking at actual references, as it's a very "uncomfortable" pose - like something straight out of a 3D modeling/t-pose esque sorta thing