/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello, Mr. Beariston here again.
bunnyburger: nice lines, keep an eye out on the perspective though! Some of your boxes are going away from the vanishing point (unless that's what you want)
Jeremias: nice potion shapes, are these for a game? (ps protip if you're using photoshop, you can use nearest neighbour to resize and keep AA when sizing up)
Femmipoo: really nice linework, good job
Kuuhaku: nice fire study, try and get those varying wisps into your piece
weaklight: these are nice, like that one leg and the femur, try to get your lines in one stroke if you can
Neurosis: cute ds, try to be more confident with your line and stroke
Batankyuu: nice colours, like the fade from red orange to orange. Double props for traditional
tipsypaipai: I like the colours, try to keep shapes/composition in mind too
Kirikae: really nice gestures and linework! Favourite is 4th on the 2nd row.
Kenya: nice job, also nice handwriting
meru: nice work on the hands, also o///o
AlmostGoodAtAnatomy: cool design, like the neck apparatus thing, pay attention to different line widths to show depth though, some of it gets too heavy despite being further back
Genzai: nice job on the third page
kocik: I like how expressive your hatching is
Carl: the water's just fine, maybe a little chilly. Also nice colours on the fish
CoinHero: nice colours! Maybe could use some green reflection on the underbellies of the sea monsters to show how glowy the goo/water (?) is
Also could maybe make the pink tongue in the middle a little closer to blue/purple to match the temperature
Everybody else: gambette /dad/dies! Tomorrow's another day!