/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can I ask where is the best place to get started on light/shadow/shading/rendering? I can do lines pretty well.

Female torsos.

Female torsos

Top right one is consciously exaggerated, rest I tried to keep real proportions. I find front view difficult and would appreciate protips.

Hey all, would appreciate some thought on the torsos.

Female. The top right one I made a conscious attempt at exaggerating, the other ones I tried to keep to realistic proportions.

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Nice m8, blog or website? I'd love to follow you and get inspiration. Only thing I'd say is that the guy looks a little bit posed and stiff? I feel like his sense of weight and motion could be better, indicating thrust. Awesome work though man mirin.

Anyway guys, can someone critique my torsos. I think I've got the right idea, but some stuff needs work.

Females. I'm pretty happy with them actually, but appreciate any constructive advice or redlining. Especially with front view! I struggled the most with front view. I think I basically got it, but it still doesn't satisfy me. Granted, you almost never draw people in this stiff police line up kind of front pose but still.

The top right pose is consciously exaggerated, the rest I tried to maintain realistic proportions.

(I know this isn't porn per se, but my goal is to do porn commissions, so yeah. And the beginner generals tend to be really fast moving and work is swallowed up there)