/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4974828
>>4976044 is right. To be specific, not enough range in values and it's bland due to the lack of color in the face and shading. a bit of ambient occlusion and color helps the illustration, as shown in pic related
while colorpicking your drawing, you seem to go straight down in value to shade. try studing lighting and see how not just value, but saturation and hue change on surfaces, particularly skin