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There's more to her figure messed up than her legs (see pic for notes), but basically your main problem is that you did not draw a skeleton (or if you did, then you drew it incorrectly).

Remember that when girls cross their legs, the knees will cross the center line of the body to the other side. Right now her left (our right) leg is not moved far enough over. The angle she is currently sitting at, you should actually be able to see BOTH thighs in the picture -- almost all of her right thigh, and a little bit of her left leg's inner thigh. You will also get a little bit of her crotch as well.

Regarding her right leg, while it is mostly turned to the side, there is still a little bit facing towards the viewer. Because of this, her foot would not be completely sideview like you drew in the pic, but rather angled slightly towards us. We should be able to see most of her toes.

Her foot is slightly too small, and her hand very much too large. Good rule of thumb:
>foot length = distance from wrist to inner elbow
>hand size (base of palm to fingertip) slightly smaller than face

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