/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4239030
>>4238983

Yep. Here goes.

So here's a picture of different versions of ideal proportions. You can see how the lines are the head height and they line up with certain landmarks. Some landmarks are off, like how the ribcage is one head height from shoulders to rib. Or how knees are set about half to 3/4 way through the length they reside in.

Your character is roughly 7 heads tall, but she has the proportions of someone who is 7-1/2 to 8 heads tall depending on what part of the body you're looking at, except when you count down to the 7th head of height (going from top to bottom) suddenly she has feet where she should have ankles.

Just going by the head size she has, one head down from the chin is the bottom of her ribcage instead of nippe line, her shoulders are one head length wide from the side of the neck instead of one head width, the third head length is where her hips seem to be rather than her navel, at head length 4 you've placed the middle of her thighs rather than crotch, at head length 5 are her knees instead of mid-thigh, at head length 6 it goes from knees to ankles suddenly, and then at 6.5 it stops at the bottom of her feet. Not to mention, her elbows are landing around the spot the navel is supposed to land, however her navel seems to be somewhere halfway through the 3rd head of height. Then the forearms are much too short for the middle finger to land at mid-thigh because her knees are much too low. Those thighs are so long and the calves are shortened down to one head length. Legs should be long enough to bend in half and have the heel touch the hip, so they're about the same length, at least in women.

I hope this helps you out. Obviously if you're doing something more like anime where they're 6 heads tall or something it's going to be different but there are still proportions to be applied to them too.

>>3943584

>>3613173

>>2292313
proportions, never overrated

>>2170160
Draw from references first to get a feeling for the proportions

>>2041887
oh also her arms look a just a tad long. Remember that the wrists end at the gooch.