/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1949188
>>1949185
don't listen to this guy, airbrush is lovely for blending. What yall need to do is simply tone it down. I like her butt

heres what I did:
>I felt the border was too tight, so I expanded it
>fixed a few perspective issues
>added some blue hues in her face reflected from her clothing
>some of the lighting didn't make sense, I hope you can understand where i'm coming from here. I tried to improve it a bit for you

these are just suggestions, I'm not trying to dictate how you do your piece. I hope this helps , the reason I bothered is because I really like where it is going