/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2106857
The lack of dynamics is something I need to work on, but I was exploring that in the first picture and it came out kind of a mess.

It's hard incorporating concepts into a compositionally interesting illustration. But it's worth a shot every once in a while.

I'm also not great at photoshop in general I usually just work traditionally so I need to get used to the medium and how to use layers and things other than the hard round brush.

As for the chef that doesn't really bother me. He's just supposed to look asian, in an asian art style.

The focal point being far away I fixed in this. Tried to put it more towards the middle and cropped a large part of the right side off of it.

I'm moving onto a new piece now that could hopefully be more dynamic. If not dynamic than just an interesting art style. It's something of a children's illustration. I could try some softer brushes and less generic character design with it.