/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Something unfinished that I haven't worked on for a very long time (years).

>>4147845
This has a beautiful texture to it. And your sketches have lots of character.

>>4155813
Thumbnail is really nice because the colour and values are well chosen. Wish it wasn't so sloppy.

>>4157454
Nice sense of form.

>>4186931
This has such a great feeling to it even though the craft is not so good. People don't appreciate the depressing beauty of sulfur lit office parks. Reminds me of Hopper.

>>4189478
Needs more hue range. Digits 4 and 5 on bottom hand are too big, digit 3 too small.

>>4190564
Stars/moon and figure are competing for dominance, moon in bad place compositionally, get reference for figure. Clouds should be somewhat behind and maybe in front of parts of figure for depth.

>>4193793
Try to use natural, diffused light. Interior space lit by daylight can work as long as sun is not shining directly on it. Hold the piece in front of you at various angles until you can't see the glare. Don't use flash or interior lights.