/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

quick thing from life, I think 40 mins total. No time for details, though she might model for me again

>>1793998
Nice, I think it would be better if you bent the texture around the forms. Right now the left part doesn't add anything and is distracting. Also brown guy doesn't cast shadows, what gives?

>>1793978
>>1793508
Cool

>>1794004
Clouds look like they belong to a straight horizon. Try and look at pics of clouds from actual planes. The formations are way different when seen from above