/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3803312
Finished it.

Not happy with it but I was able to figure out the things I think I did wrong.

>Neck too long
>The more I look at the head the more off centre it looks on the neck
>She wasn't meant to look exhausted but not weary
>She looks grumpy instead (I think)
>Fucked up leg and pelvis placement
>Especially on the left leg
>She's meant to be bottom heavy so it might not be as bad as I think, conversely it could be worse
>Arms are wonky and I need to work on my hands still
>Not sure if the legs look right
>Really need to figure out how to draw that hairstyle at different angles

I'm happy with her overall design but if you guys could confirm where I've fucked up on a technical level that would be great. The more I get wrong now the less I'll hopefully get wrong later with a little guidance.