/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1923500
Pose is ambiguous - I can't tell if the arms are coming forward holding an invisible object or if they're supposed to be on her waist. Head's a little big, and face is too big for the head. Your lighting is also flat and inconsistent.

Construct the body from basic forms (boxes and cylinders), pick a definite primary light source direction, and use the construction to better map out what planes are facing the light and which ones aren't.

Redline for possible pose suggestion. Either way I'd look for some refs or take photos of yourself and extrapolate what you need.