/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

how's this? first time using a dip pen and drew my hand (weird light sources in the room I did this in). also first time using cross hatching for shading with a dip pen, and probably should've used one that I can have further ink flow than dipping

gonna be studying Hampton and Loomis soon, so I thought I'd go ahead and practice my anatomy and see where I'm currently at

my scanner's currently broken, so had to take a pic of this with my smartphone
first time using dip pen and I drew this. thoughts?

mostly been learning perspective, but I'm gonna learn anatomy soon & i know that hands are usually one of the hardest things to draw