/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7013914
Forgive me if I'm out of line because I don't know the context of the characters- wouldn't the arm be the other participants hue? The fact that it's the same color as the leg and so short, it took a second to interpret and I thought something was pinching her thigh. Maybe add a simple shade to help readability. here's a quick sketch to convey my meaning.