/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1959920
for more comedic effect, you want to build up the attack, make it look like some cool shit's about to happen an then blamo, he's donzo

i'd also say, the run feels a bit one speedy, have more ease in to the knight reachin mAXIMUM SPEED

here's a lil quick storyboard of how i'd have done this shot, not sayin that's what you should do, jus a lil exampy xamp of how to build up the tension in the scene before havin it comedically cut to the knight gettin slamma jamma'd

(sorry if you saw original, had to fix lil thing)