/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4965687
The face is great and your rendering is very very nice. The piece feels very unfinished tough you did not render shadows on the clothing in many places. Also a lot of the curves on bracelets, collars, stockings, belt etc. feel flat they need to actually go around the body's form to look like they are actually covering the shape. As other Anon mentioned it some more accurate anatomy can help ,especially on the midriff area and shoulders and the light sources could be a e bit better defined that will immediately help the form.

Keep it up your rendering is great.