/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5167839
hand too big ( bad foreshortening ), gesture is weak ( the leg is awkward ), head too small ( overall bad proportions for the entire body ), the leading foot is in the wrong gesture ( this is a nitpick, you'd have to understand foot anatomy to get this right, don't worry about it too much) , the ax is also badly foreshortened ( too big ) , the torso is also too long ( because you were trying to fit the hand pose in it so you didn't pay attention, this is common with lack of understanding of overlapping structures ) , you can honestly just leave it at that ( but it's your choice ). Sketches can be appealing and yours is, once you line it, the mistakes will show, and you'll feel bad about it ( gotta think about emotional state as a form of creative resource , the more you feel good, the more you can draw, the more drawing time , the more you can learn and draw for pleasure and practice your hands ) . same energy pic related

t. prokofag