/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3605716
>>3605746
Curse you two, I have nothing to say.

>>3605770
The thumb's nail looks a bit angled away. Try making more of it visible from the pov.
Also, starting from the wrist and upwards should be much wider than the rest of the arm.

>>3605835
The scene slightly confuses me. The bike appears to be moving as can be seen from the exhaust and rotating wheels, but the rest of the bike seems to lack the motion blur. If she's just revving it up, the exhaust shouldn't extend so far. If she's skidding it, there should be an indication on the street (such as a dust cloud), and the exhaust should be pointing to the side.
tl;dr: The art isn't bad, but the action scene isn't really set up well. Needs work.

>>3605871
Cool art, but the neck and ear seem to be lacking in shading detail, like they're illuminated alone for some reason, making them seem flat. Add a few subtle gradients like you did to the face, and it should be golden.

>>3605953
The ears are too high. Put them a little bit lower than eye-level.
Add some shade to the gums or make them look detailed, your choice.
I'm assuming you meant for the teeth to be comically oversized and not correctly numbered?

>>3606010
The left foot is angled too far to the right.

>>3606012
Move the belly button to the center.

>>3606680
Straighter ears?

>>3606770
Flower with flat crystal petals?

>>3606871
The neck is too thick for the head it's carrying.