/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3504923
If you want to practice anatomy, practice it in realistic proportions and format. It'll teach better shape design and yield deeper understanding of anatomy in the first place.

Also, the gesture is a bit stiff an unnatural. Perspective is unconvincing. Those are both essential to figure drawing.

I'd also make sure to study the bony landmarks, as your drawing is lacking a collar-bone entirely, and the shoulders and neck look like putty as a result.

And while this doesn't have to do with anatomy per se, that expression is awful. I don't mean to be a dick, but the one eyebrow raised expression is an expression cliche, indicative of an artist that either doesn't care or hasn't studied actual human expressions that are much more effective and conveying a realistic mood.

Just my two cents. Sincerely hope you find this helpful!