/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2340173
i was trying to design an overly muscular male, and was using this as a reference

i could post some more examples of my work if you want to see those

i really like your torso though, damn i hope i can get to that level
>>2340169
>you just have to develop it
someone told me this a few threads back when i posted another drawing i did, that at my level its more about putting in the hours
what do you think about >>2340173
should i really go back to reading, and where do you think my flaws lie?