/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5233472
>>5233487

I hope that helps.

Basically the upper body is very stiff, particularly obvious with the arms. But then the pelvis has to be huge which you can get away with, but you've had to break her legs to get them into their current position.

With the Herny pic you've posted, you'll see that the spinal S-curve is still prominent even though it's straight, but the clothing adds curvature. You've accomplished that with the lower half, with the flow of the skirt looking good, the anatomy is just a little too broken to be masked.

that's just my opinion tho.