/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>P.S: btw, remember Mr Peniston? that was me, just wanting to say it
YOU BASTARD CATH DON'T YOU GO DYING ON MEEEE

Hello lassos! I'm Mr Peniston! sorry for being absent for so long! I'm going to do some comments!

>[[no:body]]
cute! nice drawing!

>nicnac
boy, what happened? I know you can do better than this! look closely at the forms!

>Celestino
pretty good, friend!

>professorSugoi
I feel you could do better lineart, but good job!

>Manu
Can't draw hair? do it more!

>Lazy_Lara
very cool studies

>Feilereht
Very funny robot

>Dataizm
keep practicing this stuff and you'll see!

>tabascoshrimp
beautiful drawing

>Beanhead
are these from imagination?

>Carl
drawing animals it's a good idea, more people should practice that

>Inno
can't wait to see your next piece!

>Clapped
Those feet look pretty weird and thin

>doki
I think you need to practice anatomy before trying something like this

>miloyoyo
what were you trying to achieve with this study?

That's all for today, good night, lassos! stay healthy, take rests and drink a lot of water! bye!

Hello fellow lassos, Mr Peniston is here! how's summer going? remember to rest even if you are drawing everyday, your health is important!

>dough
great figure!

>ryrin
I like the angry girl, very expressive

>steve_owo
nice

>Kirikae
this mecha is amazing! but be careful with that hand, It's pretty bad!

>tekkyJSKURT
studying Hampton?

>Paganini
not bad, keep practicing

>lilramune
I don't think this head's set up is good, you should learn from other sources. Figures are good though

>御前様
studying Katsuya Terada?

>Rynseni
You've got a long way to go my friend, but keep learning and you'll get better!

>Helms
I didn't noticed you before! It's nice to have someone doing little comics

>Louse
I'm glad you are still going since original LAS

>Lachlan
Beautiful!

>elliot
Nice purple, but improve those proportions!

>Limecola
strong guy!

>tipsypaipai
the movement feel slow, but the flow is great!

Mr Peniston here for some quick comments! sorry for the wait guys, I've been very busy

>ryrin
anatomy is pretty faulty but I still like this sketch!

>Kirikae
Ugly guy!

>second acct
Hey, nice gestures, keep going!

>KidTravailler
study more, kid!

>psiekier
gotta work on those shapes

>MRNotMB
be careful with proportions, his head is huge!

>Aren
beautiful sketch, and very comfy

>Srion
beautiful girl!

>Paganini
you have to work more, my friend!

>Coinhero
I love the smoke and dust! great ligth!

>Cannon
It reminds me of adult cartoon characters like Fritz the cat and such, nice

>plapo
amazing

>st⋆rs
you can do a better composition than this, have you read Framed Ink?

>Arma
I like the mecha!

>Mariafire295
Very cute, the navel shouldn't ve visible under that suit, though

>Cath
no time to draw today?

>reav
add more contrast even if It's a quick sketch, it will look better

>Beanhead
those eyes are great

Hello, lassos! It's me! Mr Peniston!

>Anonymous
Wonderful! but what about if you use the entire page next time?

>mrpurin
beautiful clothes

>mfalencar
I love them! are you making sentai characters?

>mercy
nice, keep grinding!

>Frog
fun!

>Aggretsuko
great drawing! you can clearly feel her presence

>tekkyJSKURT
cool character and nice colors

>MRNotMB
that biker proportions become huge at the middle!

>Louse
Wonderful studies

>Lachlan
Keep working, my friend!

>bunnyburger
the cat is very fun!

>7
this is so simple, yet so cool!

>Feilereht
Bottom left don't have much sense, find a good "skeleton" for your figures!

>nemori
great shapes

>tabascoshrimp
draw the penis you coward!

Mr Peniston here! how's everybody? long time no see!

>psiekier
These are cute, keep working! a lot of people started drawing faces like these

>Kirikae
I think you drew that ear too high!

>second acct
:(

>potatoes_spaghetti
this is beautiful! I love the color of the sea

>Louse
Not bad, good figures!

>nemori
beautiful figures!

>manadabes
It doesn't seem like you are using perspective, Manadabes, It's pretty wrong

>ohpm
very comfy!

>Frog
is this a creepy muk?

>Nemori
I love these cats! wonderful studies!

>soda
there's something creepy about them

>lilramune
yes, work harder!

>Okayu
this cat is fun

>Lachlan
It doesn't seem like you've drawn the base first, and it shows

>Petal.jpeg
see Mike Mignola drawings, you'll learn a lot of things!

>st⋆rs
pretty clunky, you'll do better

>porocora
vivid colors!

>jerrybreem
Don't press the pencil so hard, Jerry! that's what kids do

>kringlefkr
curious sculpture, where have you been?

Good evening! I'm Mr Peniston!

>Clover
Curious scene, what are they talking about?

>Moirem
proportions are pretty bad, I know you can do better than this!

>mfalencar
Very good!

>tipsypaipai
No need to apologize, draw what you want!

>Menes
No time to draw more today?

>elliot
I like the mood she transmits!

>weaklight
grind, grind, grind!

>KaraMong
Pretty good hand!

>7b7a2f
I think it needs more hard edges!

>HardWorkingAgemo
Pretty nice! watercolors are hard, right?

>porocora
This reminds me when I filled entire pages in high school with drawings

>beachpacket
That's the way!

>silvemis
simple, but nice!

>Petal.jpeg
Avoid black shadows, what if you learn some color theory?

>Whizzard
Perspective is fucked everywhere, I know you can do better.

>meru
beautiful doodles!

>theritz
Spooky! by the way, you still haven't submitted your mechas to the challenge.

>Carl
cool, are these prehistoric creatures?

>Bunnytots
read the sticky, my friend

>dattab
Who's this? what movie? I know I have seen her somewhere!

>leo
that's a weird dress for piloting a mecha

>Thaane
wow, love it!

>arxeny
beautiful rhino

Mr Peniston here, ready for some comments! how are you girls doing tonight?


>Menes
I like the colors, remind me of the Game Boy palette

>Moirem
Work on those faces, friend!

>Kirikae
I like how small the head is compared with the rest of the mecha!

>tipsypaipai
I think this is too moe for me

>bandit
come on, you can do more than this!

>mfalencar
Dark Oni! cool!

>7b7a2f
I understand completely.

>Batankyuu
You have to work on fundamentals, but cute!

>Kenya
nice gestures! keep going!

>psiekier
have to grind anatomy, friend, for starters those legs are too short

>lilramune
work, work, work! good job!

>Brother-kun
That spiderman is incredibly stiff! work on your flow!

>Femmipoo
Does it have It's own cereal brand too?

>AlmostGoodAtAnatomy
This is not good, friend, you should start over, trust me. It will came out better, you must learn to stop working on a bad piece, don't fear it!

>bunnyburger
Come on, Bunnyburger!

>sleepy
I like the texture!

>Finlay
Pentel?

Hi guys! Mr Peniston here, I just wanted to say that me, Mr Peniston, I am very busy these days, but don't worry! keep working, I support you and I'm sure you can do great things!
Remember to rest and stretch your wrists and back, and take care of your mental health too! I'm Mr Peniston! goodbye friends!

Mr Peniston here, ready to make some comments!

>Will
Your drawings are good, but why do you make them look like animation frames? (or whatever these ones are called)
If It is an artistic choice is weird, but like I said, good art.

>Kirikae
Humanoid mechas look better with humanoid mechs in my opinion, but I'm glad you are working!

>theritz
Trippy

>Wilbe
Did you make this with the mouse?

>Choob
Why so blurry?

>Menes
great shapes, friend! keep at it

>yomotsuheguri
Not bad, nice values!

>Chuntao
You have to learn perspective!

>slug jelly
You are doing pretty good with perspective!

Hi guys! Mr Peniston here ready to make some comments! how are you?

>vistorf
That's a buff drowzee

>Dataizm
I know you can do better than this, no time today?

>Naisei
Seems like you forgot to check the "draw a box" challenge!

>Inno
What's this? does it have its mouth opened or is just a weird shape in the hair?

>Jeremias
Great work on the upper right!

>Spritist
Nice work with the values!

>Sun
Why is Vusta's drawing over there?

>Will
very nice! great anatomy

>bandit
your thumbnails are great, can't wait to see your mechas

>CoinHero
Very good work, great composition

>Stutter
This is coming out awesome! keep going

>Oneironaut
Don't be scared of faces, One, they are more scared of you.

>Tooru
You need to improve your rendering a lot, what if you follow some tutorials?

>Whitehand
Nice light and contrast!

>Agemonogatari
What were you trying to do? practice values? anatomy? doesn't seem like you manage to learn something anyway...

Michael Peniston here in the mood for some comments! I'm glad you guys are keeping the threads so lively, but don't forget to draw! the new website is really bringing people back!

>kringlefkr
Great crocodile studies! I like them

>jerrybreem
I'm glad you are trying something different, Jerry! use references and keep grinding!

>Stutter
Great flow of movement, Stutter!

>CoinHero
Beautiful! I love those saturated colors!

>bandit
Reminds me of Gordon Freeman, fun!

>Seal
Seal, if you want to improve try drawing for imagination AFTER drawing from references! this doesn't look like 30 minutes at all, though...

>Tooru
Scared of faces, Tooru? you shouldn't!

>Ideon
Doesn't look like 30 minutes, son. But draw more!

>st⋆rs
top
kek

>huhnchen
This looks too flat, try adding shadows!

>Batankyuu
Comfy

>Senpai_Andre
This is a very good composition practice, keep going!

Long time no see, folks! I'm Mr Peniston, and I'm in the mood for some comments! let's get started!

>Tooru
Some faces are better than the others, keep grinding

>leo
dat ass

>7b7a2f
This is so simple but for some reason I like it, it feels calm, I guess it's the light.

>theritz
Beautiful, I really like these sketches, amazing job.
I see your first submission is a 3D model, keep in mind this is for drawings only.

>KidTravailler
That torso is too long.

>Stutter
nice design! you are doing well.

>Chuntao and mrpurin
Why people are drawing so many rocks these days? good work.

>VuSta
You have some problems about how the head and back connects, but overall nice anatomy.

>bunnyburger
You sure these are 30 minutes, son?

>lolbuns
Animation is good but you missed out the proportions, the table looks veeery high

>Inno
This looks very good, and like a photography too.

>professorSugoi
great design!

Michael Peniston here! doing comments after you submit your work was a good thing, let's all do that again!

Rhydwyn, the face is kinda ugly but I like this Chun-li anyway. Nice colors.

Neat boy, Neato.

you are doing cool studies these days, Oneironaut, keep doing.

Careful, tabascoshrimp, those legs are too long compared with the torso.

I'm sure this didn't took you 30 minutes, toan. Well, who cares.

Nice colors, Soroneir!

CandyCone, I don't know If you'll finish this, but I like it.

EuJaFuiHomem, what's this, a bag? I'm sure you could have worked on it more.

Good, Nyra, good! fantastic arms.

microteller, please start learning anatomy

Wellcome to LAS, HouseOfFolkung

I'm Michael Peniston, and I have come here to comment submissions and chew bubble gum... and I'm all outta gum.

Amazing start, Tugelbend! wellcome!

I love how you painted the girl, Grach, very nice.

Just perfect, Kaile, do you work in some big company?

What's the deal with that ugly lineart, femalecarnivores? don't use it!

That body is minuscule, CRT, work in your proportions!

I love it, Lokki, amazing forms.

Great expression, Headake, very intense.

Good, Oneironaut, good! keep it up like that!

Beutiful work, coinhero, I really like the brushtrokes.

You have to grind anatomy, Speedy, that body is totally broken. You are understanding how foreshortening works, though.

Cool Donnie Darko OC, marno, but work on that lineart.

Top kek, Whizzard.

Your sketchbook looks interesting, maiqtheliar!

Michael Peniston here! I'm in the mood for some comments from yesterday's submissions.

Echo, I'm waiting for seeing this finished, you are very good.

Candycone and Mathias, I love it! you two have made an amazing work! the text is also very interesting.

Jerrybreem, I told you to measure! why don't you do it? look how the proportions came off, that forehead is enormous.

Sorry Tom, that foreshortening is terrible, keep practicing.

You better work on your construction, webbeva.

Aestro, I guess this is unfinished? it should be cute but the mother looks very creepy.

Invalidavid, get out.

Very cute girl, Pihori, wellcome back.

Not sure of what I'm looking at, PerspectivelyIn, but it looks cool.

I'm sure this is not 30 minutes, flowerono852.

You too, HumanBean.

Tabascoshrimp, many have told you already: nice dog.

Michael Peniston here in the mood for some comments!

Nyra, this looks pretty good but be careful with the eyes, they look squinting.

Logmaster, you are in the right way but practice more!

Louse, what were you trying to do with these studies? they don't look very helpful...

very good, HumanBean, drawing from life is an excellent exercise, do it anytime you can (I don't think It's 30 minutes though)

jozu, this is scary

I like how the colors are going, coinhero!

Hman, you will never stop rendering so blurry, do you?

This looks too muddy, Nelli, I think you should practice color theory.

Nice, tabascoshrimp! the armadillo is pretty funny.

Check out those breasts, CRT, they don't follow the perspective of the torso at all.

Amazing, Naf! but when are we going to see some finished stuff from you?

This is Mr Peniston, in the mood for some comments for yesterday's submissions!

Very good as always, Echo, keep it going.

You too, Mathias, I wish I'd draw as good as you.

I like these faces, PerspectivelyIn, they feel very expressive.

Malifica, you have to work on those proportions, look at those tiny heads!

jerrybreem, again the face features are too small.

goji, how do you expect to grind perspective if you don't use a simple ruler?

What is this girl doing, Headake? is she yawning? screaming? I'd probably know if the body was doing something too!

Viktor, It may look like a minor thing, but it looks that you don't take drawing seriously just for the papers you use to practice.

Where's the anatomy, Saucy?

Very nice, Hxcl!

First of all, iinaa, this doesn't look like 30 minutes, second, you haven't construct or measure proportions at all

Good, Nyra, good! keep going!

jbrennan, clealry low effort, I'm going to have to call the Gestapo

Seffy, is really good that you do finished drawings, really! but there's an obvious lack of good anatomy in all of them.

That's all for today, again, there's people that don't get even close to 30 minutes, that's very sad, my friends, you gain nothing from cheating.

Hello everybody! I'm Mr Peniston and I'm here to comment your stuff!
I'm sorry, but I was a little bit nervous for my first day and I commented the submissions of 2017-01-22 instead of yesterday, won't happen again! As my first day I'll comment on everybody!

Echo, amazing as always, It's a shame you always post last, you are one of the best artist on LAS.

SkeletonJelly, even if you are stylizing I think those legs are way too long

Digitixe, the helmet is crooked, you haven't got the head's center right, but I'm sure you can.

Cute, fluffable!

stupido, beautiful shadows! you have chosen a very nice color

gottagitgud, crooked faces, keep grinding!

that wizard is very funny, Tom

Choob, your studies always look blurry, but in this case I guess is intentional

Munch, those faces are not constructed at all

Seems like you have deleted your submission, imvisitingearth

Aimai, don't know what's happening here, guess I'll just wait until you keep working on it

Very nice faces, Louse!

Kirikae, so this is for the topic "crime"? I had to read that to know the girl was going to steal the safe

jerrybreem, looks like the face features are minuscule, like one of those photoshoped images to make the person look retarded, measure the proportions!

Interesting design, Blarghu, looks like somebody I don't wanna get him angry with me

runnerman1, I like what you are doing! sadly I wouldn't consider this a drawing, today's submission too.

Nice, Aestro

Headake, I seriously doubt this took you more than 30 minutes...

what can I say, Grach, your style is always nice

Great work, Hxcl! keep inking like that!

Malifica, the right leg doesn't look good, seems broken

boygivingup, come on man, no wonder the 30 minute gestapo is back

alm0nde, the end of the nose match the line of the face, you have to avoid these kind of things

Ketkro, don't know what to say, keep drawing

very good gestures, TekkyJSKURT!

goji, come on man, look at those heads, construct!