/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6588526
Figured it take a shot at drawing this myself. Avoid drawing individual lines for strands of hair. I suck at drawing hair and am lazy but it kind of serves my point, I just blocked out the shape of the hair and vaguely indicated the shapes of the highlights and it does well enough to show what the hair is doing in the image. The Sinix Anatomy Quick Tips video on hair might give you a decent idea of what I'm talking about here.

Secondly I recommend choosing better reference as a beginner. The image you're working from, while cool, the lighting is a bit soft and a lot of the forms around the nose are getting lost I feel like. Working from images with a stronger lighting scheme makes drawing much easier, and in my opinion makes it a bit easier to make gains from studies.

Maybe shes just gurning tf out but her jaw is off centre to the rest of her face, and the proportions for the features are pretty far off. I find this becomes a lot easier with just mileage mainly.

Her nose also looks like a chode, I recommend Prokos videos to learn a bit more about the actual forms of the features and whatnot.

Solid effort though anon, keep at it!