/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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Zoom out there Teddy Broosevelt. The reason the eye won't settle is it's trying to nest between a few small perspective errors.

Follow the centerline of the helmet through the chin.

The visor center needs to move left, the nose right, and then the eye will fall into place a little higher.

With the space blank, the errors aren't visible, but trying to settle an eye in the middle draws them out.

This is a super early WIP to illustrate what I mean. I'll finish it, but I have to go to work.